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Post by janice on Feb 27, 2007 14:20:43 GMT -5
Moving the thread over here.
I am sort of stuck with it at the moment. I have just been establishing the baseline of the story. Some of my thoughts are:
1. Norman's brother: He was a daredevil like Jesse. Norman souped up his bike for him and he ended up like this. Now Norman feels guilty. This would just give background on how Norman got into the motorcycle field.
2. Ray Corrido: Dan had mentioned wanting to do a story bringing back Anthony Corrido. I was opening the door with maybe Jesse finding out at the end that they never found Corrido's body. Then the scene at the end with Corrido in a wheelchair vowing to get even.
I have a beginning and an end, but no middle.
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Post by ducati749s on Mar 9, 2007 17:01:56 GMT -5
Moving the thread over here. I am sort of stuck with it at the moment. I have just been establishing the baseline of the story. Some of my thoughts are: 1. Norman's brother: He was a daredevil like Jesse. Norman souped up his bike for him and he ended up like this. Now Norman feels guilty. This would just give background on how Norman got into the motorcycle field. 2. Ray Corrido: Dan had mentioned wanting to do a story bringing back Anthony Corrido. I was opening the door with maybe Jesse finding out at the end that they never found Corrido's body. Then the scene at the end with Corrido in a wheelchair vowing to get even. I have a beginning and an end, but no middle. Oh F**K! I forgot about this, sorry Janice. A few ideas of my own; Norman is gone, SH is even needed by the police to assist in a case(They havent told the public though). Jesse being on the force overhears a conversation between Altobelli and ?? explaining this. Giving Norm a motorcycle background , I would slighty modify your idea Janice, I think Norman should have grown up around his older brother who was a daredevil and he gradually showed Norm how bikes work etc. and so in the end Norman became his Bro's mechanic. I have a few more ideas, I will have to refine them a bit though.....
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