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Post by janice on Feb 10, 2007 18:56:59 GMT -5
I had sort of thought Jesse shirking work and racing out the door to be the final scene. Altobelli had recapped/wrapped up the Norman/Phil saga and the car theft and thinks SH is history. Then Jesse runs off to bring SH back. This is the lead in to Ducati's new story. But if you have a better ending, please feel free, and I'll delete mine.
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Post by Pentastar on Feb 10, 2007 23:16:07 GMT -5
No no, don't delete yours, there's nothing wrong with it. I just didn't know if that was "The End", sounds like it is more like "To Be Continued in A Man Apart".
Well, if that's a wrap, then Josh can post it in the Fanfiction Site!
Wohoo, that makes three scripts! Only 10 more to go, haha!
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Post by Pentastar on May 23, 2007 13:19:14 GMT -5
Since the continuation of this story was basically cancelled, I wanted to give it one final scene for some closure. Maybe you can consider this chapter the epilogue.
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A white Ford Taurus pulls up to a classic Victorian home in Montana. Norman and Mona climb out of the car and walk to the front door. As the doorbell rings they stand, there, exchanging looks in the awkward pause. An older woman comes to the door, opens it, and gasps when she sees Norman.
“Hi Mom.”
The End.
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Post by Josh on Jun 23, 2007 13:09:00 GMT -5
Just thought I would let you guys/gals know that I finally got around to posting this in the Fan Fiction part of the website.
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